Suspense First Draft
Introduction – This is my first draft of this story. I had a couple drafts before this, but I scrapped both those ideas. One of the inspirations for this story was detasseling. I am planning on adding more suspense and dialogue to make it more interesting. I intend to work on “showing” and not “telling.” I also think that using foreshadowing might add to this piece. I hope that by the end of this revision process, parts of my story will…